Monday, November 16, 2009

RJA #12c: Introduction Check

Tiffany's paragraphs were well written and the only thing was the thesis was unclear...she is working on that! I copied the wron URL...sorry.

http://drtyffknee.blogspot.com/2009/11/rja-11a-introduction.html#comments

Walter's intro. was well written. It sounds very professional, I was a little confused what his argument was.

http://wallybug171.blogspot.com/2009/11/rja-11-introduction.html#comment-form

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